If you are writing a critique or review (a "solid paper"), you might focus on these elements: Setting vs. Character
The neon sign for "Mama’s Liquor & Lotto" flickered with a rhythmic hum that matched the buzzing in Leo’s head. He had a perfectly good apartment in the suburbs—beige walls, silent neighbors, and a commute that smelled like pine-scented air freshener—but he hadn't been back in three weeks.
So the next time you see an odd code—fsdss826, or any random string—treat it not as a glitch but as an invitation. Somewhere behind that sequence of numbers is a story about someone who stopped being a spectator and became a participant in the dangerous, dirty, dazzling carnival of the shady neighborhood.